Thursday, November 29, 2007
I was in the drama group, but there was no time to do our play, so sometime we will perform it again. Our play was about a New Zealander and his dog, who travel around the North Island, picking up people along the way who tell some information about that place before they get on the ute. I was a Maori warrior from Rotorua, where Maori culture is celebrated. It's a pretty cool play. Here is the script:
(Scene: Cape Reinga lighthouse in the background. New Zealander in ute.)
Trent: G'day mate! Just setting off for my trip around the North Island! All I've got for company is my good old mate, Mutton.
Mutton: Woof woof!
Trent: OK old pal! Ready for our trip? Let's go!
Robert: And so this is where my story begins of a very interesting holiday that I just happened to be included in and about all the interesting people that joined us along the way.
It started with me walking down 90 Mile Beach when I experienced my first near death experience. I was almost run over by a crazy guy driving his ute down the beach!
"Kia ora mate! Going on a trip?"
Trent: Yeah, I'm traveling around the North Island.
Robert: Have you been to this region before? Let me tell you about the region... (tells some information about 90 Mile Beach)
... I asked him where he was heading next, and he wasn't sure, so I suggested that he go to Paihia. He thought that was a great idea and he asked me if I wanted to come along. I thought- Why not? And so my holiday began.
We talked about fishing and boating all the way to Paihia. When we got there we were bombarded by people wanting to take us on boat trips.
Aaron: Howdy! How can I help you today? Would you like to book a charter?
Trent: No thanks, we've got a long journey to Whangarei.
Aaron: Wait! Before you go, let me tell you about Paihia -
Trent: Hey! Why don't you join us - hop on the back, and tell us about Paihia on the way?
Aaron: Great! (hops in and tells some information about Paihia)
Robert: We listened to what Aaron had to say and we decided that we would definitely come back and visit Paihia again.But we were on the road again and our destination was Whangarei. We had heard about the Zion Wildlife Gardens and we wanted to find out about this place. Have YOU heard about it?
"I can see the sign!"
Ellen: Hi guys! Do you need any help?
Robert: No thanks, we're just here for a quick stop.
Ellen: Where are you heading?
Robert: Not sure yet, maybe Auckland to see the sky tower.
Ellen: Yeah! I've always wanted to go there! Would you like to know some information about Zion Wildlife Gardens?
Trent: Sure. Why don't you hop on the back and tell us on the way to Auckland?
Ellen: OK, sounds cool. (hops on and starts talking)
Robert: Have you been up the sky tower and walked around at the top? There's that piece of thick glass that you stand on and you always feel as though you might just fall through? Have any of you been up there and had that experience? You know, you can also...
Quinn: G'day, would you like a tour up the sky tower? It's only $125 per person!
Robert: We just saw a person bungy jumping!
Quinn: Yeah. It's cool eh? Do you want to know about the sky tower? (shares information)
Robert: OK. Want to come with us on our holiday?
Quinn: Where are you going?
Robert: Not sure, somewhere in Hamilton?
Quinn: Well, if we're going to Hamilton, let's got to the Hamilton Gardens!
Trent: Why don't you hop on the back?
Everyone: Let's go!
(Everyone sings Summer Holiday...
We're all going on a summer holiday
No more working for a week or two
Fun and laughter on our summer holiday...)
Robert: Look! The Hamilton Gardens!
Wow! It's so pretty!
Sam: Hello. Have you come to see the Hamilton Gardens?
Robert: Yes, they're amazing. I'm sure you've got something to tell us about this place.
Sam: Sure mate. This here... (shares some information)
Robert: I told Sam about our crazy holiday so far and Trent asked him if he wanted to join us. We now had 6 people in the ute and we were off to Paeroa.
I love L&P - it has a very distinctive taste and when I drink it I really feel like a New Zealander.
Kevin: Hi guys. How's it going?
Everyone: Hi - do you drink L&P?
Kevin: Would you like to know some more about Paeroa?
Robert: Yeah sure.
Kevin: OK then... (tells them)
Trent: Would you like to come with us on our trip? Hop on the back!
Robert: We were all, becoming quite friendly by this stage and we were getting a little cramped in the ute. Trent is a seriously friendly guy and anyone and everyone is his friend! After some general discussion we all decided that we wanted to see the boiling mud pools that we had all heard about in Rotorua.
Nicola: Kia ora. Have you come to see the mud pools?
Everyone: Kia ora! Yes we have!
Nicola: Let me tell you about Rotorua... (shares information)
Robert: Trent thought that Nicola would be a great person to have along on this trip and so he invited her along for the ride. I wonder if he thinks about the space in the back. Where are we going to fit all these people?
And so we were off again. Quinn said that we should go and see the little glow worms in the Waitomo Caves. Everyone agreed that this was a good idea.
Nicole: Hey, you need any help?
Robert: Oh my goodness - a glow worm!!! This was turning out to be a very interesting holiday.
Nicole: (says her bit)
Robert: And so we all heard about the Waitomo Caves.
Trent: Do you want to come along with us? Why don't you hop on the back?
Robert: Next we traveled to an enormous lake called Lake Taupo. It was huge. You can fish, boat and swim in this lake. It is a great place for a holiday... What's this we have here? A bungy jumper. He asked us if we wanted to try it. We all said NO WAY! Anyway, he wanted to tell us about Lake Taupo and so we listened.
Mathew: (tells them about Lake Taupo)
Trent: Why don't you join us? Hop on the back!
Robert: So we all squashed in and we headed away from the sun to experience some of the Winter chills and thrills that New Zealand has to offer. We headed off to Mt Ruapehu!
(Everyone sings Winter Wonderland...
Sleigh bells ring
Are you listening?
In the lane
Snow is glistening
A beautiful sight
We're happy tonight,
Walking in a Winter Wonderland...)
Robert: Sam had gardening gloves, but that was all. We really needed to get the right gear for this part of the trip.Someone in the ute asked if it was cold there. They were about to find out.
We headed into Ohakune and stopped at the information centre.
"Could you tell us a bit about Mt Ruapehu?"
Andrew: Of course... (tells them)
Trent: What are you up to at the moment? Do you want to join us? Why don't you hop on the back?
Robert: To get the right gear for all of us would have been very expensive and so we decided that we would come back to this place as well, another time. We had heard on the radio that the All Blacks were playing against the Springboks at the Cake Tin in Wellington, so we went there for the game.
Ellen wanted to know what rugby was? Duh! I can't believe that she didn't know that it was our national sport - that we New Zealanders bleed black blood.
Hennie: Hi! Do you want tickets?
Robert: Yes please. 11 and one for the dog.
Hennie: About the Cake Tin... (tells a little bit) - and here they go!!!
Everyone: Go New Zealand!
Robert: This is where our holiday ended. We all said goodbye. (Everyone acts this out and leaves stage)
We will be good mates forever after such an amazing trip and we sure do know more about New Zealand - our beautiful country.
Our homework for a few weeks was to research a New Zealand artist, as we we were studying the visual arts. Here is a photo of my presentation. I researched Diana Adams.
VISUAL ART - SPECIALIST
My Musical Painting Self Reflection:
Drawing of instruments - 4
Use of space - 4
Composition - 4
Painting techniques - 3
Colour Choice - 4
How do you feel about your work? Overall, I'm proud of it but I could have improved it if I had had a bit more time, for example, the paintbrush strokes can be seen.
Monday, November 26, 2007
This year - 2007 - I have done a lot of things.
At my school, we can sit the Australian Exams. I sat ...
English and received Distinction.
Maths and received Credit.
Writing and received Credit.
I tried out for...
The Henry Choir (Henry was our school production, about Henry VIII)
The Dance group
Korean Fan Dancing
The Reader's Quiz
& Trees For Survival.
I got into...
The Henry Choir
& Korean Fan Dancing.
The Anne Frank (60 years since her diary was first published) letter writing competition. I got shortlisted out of the whole world!
Now I've told you about all that I do at school, let me tell you a bit about myself!
I have many hobbies - scrapbooking, French, Irish Dancing, netball, flute, crafts and sport are just a few of them.In netball, I play Centre, Wing Attack and Wing Defence. I have played for two years.
My Intermediate French class has just finished for the end of the year.
I have just started to learn the flute from a private teacher last term. I really enjoy playing the flute.
Crafts is another thing that I love to do - knitting, crosstitch - everything!
Irish dancing is my FAVOURITE hobby by far. I am in my third year, and in the troupe: a group of dancers that will soon be peforming in public and competitions as well as our annual end of year concert. I have moved onto hard shoes this year - now I can tap!
I love the music too, sometimes it is slow and beautiful for a reel dance, and sometimes it is lively and fun for a jig.
I love Irish Dancing and will do it until I cannot move anymore.
Sunday, November 25, 2007
At my school, computers are a big part of our learning. We present our work using Garageband, Wikispaces etc, but there are many other tools that we could use as well. Ourstory is a programme that creates timelines. We could make timelines of our learning or timelines of how we are achieving our goals.
Most of these tools you have to register for, but it's free!
Many schools still teach 'the old way' - using books and pens. My school uses laptops and computers everyday! I think that it is important that we use computers in our learning because we are the first generation that don't have the choice of whether to use computers, or to use paper. We are growing up in a digital world, so we need skills in ICT.
Also, at my school, we have paper portfolios and e-portfolios. Paper portfolios often have the actual copy of your work: this is a plus. However, in paper portfolios you cannot put in sound / animations / movies. This is a minus.
In e-portfolios, yes! you can have movies and other things that you cannot put in a paper portfolio. But e-portfolios do not hold all your assessments or tests that you have done at school.
With e-portfolios you can access them both at school and at home. Your parents can view them from home as well.
My school has knowledge net. Each student has a 'space' that is passworded and protected. It is still on the web, but only the students and their teachers can enter their space. On knowledge net you can chat with your classmates and create pages. Within a student's space, they have their e-portfolio. They can create pages within their e-portfolio (within their knowledge net space) for specific things such as their achievements. We like to personalize our homepage with things that we like and what we do out of school.
This is why I have created an e-portfolio on a blog. I am in an experiment with a few of my classmates. We have all created a second e-portfolio on wikis and blogs. Then the teachers will see whether they should keep going with knowledge net next year, or use wikis and blogs (where your audience / viewers are the whole world.)
This week (Week 8) we have started to look at poetry. I love to write poems, so I am glad that we will be doing a lot of poems for the rest of this term! For our homework (http://kiwianainroom5.wikispaces.com!) we have to write a poem a day using many different formats. Then we will put them together, so we each have an anthology! I have started and written a poem for homework this afternoon.
My teacher has created another wiki on poetry where we each have a page that we can upload our poems onto.
This term, in pairs, we are writing a pourqoui, a story that tells why. (Pourqoui is the French word for why.) We are writing them about New Zealand. Then we are recording it on Garageband and making it into a podcast digital story.
Here is my pourquoi...
Why the Rotorua mud pools bubble.
Long, long ago, Rotorua was famous for its crystal clear, cool springs surrounded by luscious green ferns and bush covered hills. But the people of Rotorua were too scared to swim in the springs on the sweltering hot days when Te Ra, the sun was large and full in the sky because under the ground there was a sleeping taniwha. The taniwha's name was Te Wheke, and he had been sleeping under the ground for many, many years.
One hot summer day, the villagers decided that they could not stand the heat any longer and they wanted to go for a swim, so they decided to set a trap for Te Wheke, the taniwha. One brave person named Tahitoa volunteered to be the bait. He jumped into the spring and started to swim.
Very soon, Te Wheke woke up, only to see Tahitoa swimming in is spring! Furious, Te Wheke lunged for Tahitoa, but Tahitoa was too fast, and swam to the bank. Te Wheke sprung out of the water... and into the trap! But Te Wheke's anger was so great, the ground shook, which caused massive cracks in the earth.
Suddenly a volcano started to erupt sending ash and lava flying into the springs. The springs began to bubble from the hot rocks and the ash, and to this very day the springs have never stopped bubbling.
And so this is why the Rotorua mud pools bubble.
By Nicola and Trent.
You can also listen to my classmates' work as a podcast on our podomatic site: http://pourquoistories.podomatic.com.
Sunday, November 18, 2007
This term, we studied kiwiana. I did a collage on fish and chips - a kiwi tradition!
Our homework is put onto a wiki so that we can access it at home, and at school. http://kiwianainroom5.wikispaces.com.
Our homework one week was to make a kete (a woven Maori bag) or use an existing bag and put in at least 5 kiwiana items, or pictures of them with typed up factfile cards. Here are some pictures of my kete...
Two things that interested me the most about the artist I studied and their art were * how she is obsessed with river stones and loves to paint them! * and how she was going to be a lawyer but decided to be an artist instead.
My time management durig this inquiry project was
One thing that I need to work on with regards to researching in the future is gathering information from as many sources as I can to form in depth questions and answers.
The things that I was pleased with about my presentation were my little group of 6 paintings done by Diana Adams, all of plants!
The things that I would change about my presentation are next time I would make my answers longer.
I am a better researcher after this inquiry because now I have repeated this process 4 times and I am familiar with it.
Our fertile question (a question where there is no right answer, nor wrong answer) for this term is Will our Culture Survive Without the Arts? I think that it cannot: The Arts are a huge part of our culture. This includes Maori culture. Maoris have the poi dance in their culture, and also the haka, another way of expressing their feelings. Language is also a huge part of culture, and, in its own way, an art.
Tourism has been big in New Zealand, especially since the movie Lord of the Rings was filmed here.
Maori weaving is a visual art, and music is a part of New Zealand as well. For example, Dave Dobbyn's song, Welcome Home, has a little bit of Maori language incorporated into the lyrics.
So you see, if we were to take all these arts out of our culture - visual art, drama, music and dance - that are specific to New Zealand, I do not think that New Zealand culture would be the same, or even survive. The Arts are a huge part of our culture.
Promoting New Zealand through the Arts reflection:
The Thinking Hats:
Our NZ play - the script is in a more recent post for you to read - The Arts.
How did your performance promote New Zealand?
What aspects did you include that were specific to New Zealand?
* Our play was about visiting different places in New Zealand.
* We 'learnt' a little bit about each place while we were there.
* The places we visited promoted New Zealand - like when we went to the rugby.
What were the good things about your performance and how it promoted New Zealand and its culture?
* We may be able to persuade people to visit these places when they learn a little bit about each place that we visit.
* We incorporated Maori culture into a play - I was a Maori form Rotorua, where Maori culture is celebrated.
What were the bad things about your performance?
In what way did it fail to promote New Zealand and its culture?
* We haven't got many microphones, so we will have to speak really clearly and loudly.
* Our play was meant to be maximum of 5 minutes, but it us over 10!
How did you feel about your performance?
How did you feel about the impacts that your performance had in promoting New Zealand and its culture?
* The planning of our play was fun, but limited in time.
* We haven't performed our play yet, but I think that it will teach everyone a little bit about our amazing country and the places that you can go.
What would you do differently in the performance?
How could your perfomance have further promoted New Zealand and its culture?
* Our organisation and time management could have been improved.
* More microphones!
* In promoting New Zealand and its culture, we only had New Zealand destinations and a powerpoint in the background. We sang a New Zealand song, Summer Holiday, and I did a Maori dance, but they weren't obvious things and we could have included other aspects of New Zealand and The Arts.
What type of thinking did you use in planning, practicing, performing and promoting New Zealand?
* Positive thinking. We were a little bit pressured with the time.
* Creative thinking. How were we going to promote New Zealand and The Arts?
Towards the end of this study, we all brought something representing Kiwiana culture and put it in a time capsule, to be buried in the foundations of one of my classmate's new house. I brought one of my dad's old jandals!
I have decided to put in the time capsule a jandal.
I have chosen this item because jandals are a kiwiana icon! And many New Zealanders wear jandals.
I think that it is important to preserve this and pass it on to future generations because fashion changes - who knows whether jandals will still exist?
The item that I have chosen reflects New Zealand culture in the following ways:
Jandals are a kiwiana icon. It shows that New Zealand has a lot of coast line - the beach is a kiwi tradition for many. People associate jandals with New Zealand.
Reflecting on my learning: Do we have a responsibility to pass on our culture from one generation to another? Justify your answer.
No one knows when our time capsule will be found, nor what life will be like in a couple of hundred years. Jandals may not exist, and people can find out what life was like in 2007.
Are the Arts an effective way of preserving culture and passing it down from one generation to another? Will our culture survive without the arts? Justify your answer.
The Arts are a way to express your feelings. They are a huge part of New Zealand. Everywhere, the Arts are incorporated with our culture. (See above) If we were to take away the Arts from our culture, I don't think that our culture would survive.
In Term 3 we studied Human Rights. Here are some pictures that I selected that represent Human Rights...
the problems they face, why they flee and how they flee. As part of this, we read as a class, Boy Overboard, by Morris Gleitzman. This story is about a boy named Jamal (11), his younger sister Bibi (9), and their parents. They live in Afghanistan where there are many landmines planted under the surface of the desert, and girls aren't allowed to go outside unaccommpianied by a male relative. The government in Afghanistan also forbids fizzy drink, music and soccer, which is Jamal's life! Jamal's mum runs a school for the village kids, which is also forbidden. When the government finds out, Jamal's family is forced to flee. He hopes that one day he can come back and he and Bibi can show the government their soccer skills, then maybe the government will let his family come back and live in Afghanistan. But when practicing his soccer skills outside one night, Bibi joins him and does an amazing kick.....................right through their front door. Just then their house blows up! The government had planted a bomb in their house. Luckily, no one was inside. In the middle of the night, Jamal's father takes Jamal and Bibi far away. Without Mum. Jamal's father goes to find their mum and Jamal and Bibi stay the night an in old, abandoned shop. The soccer stadium is just down the road, and in the morning many people are heading towards it, so as Jamal and Bibi's father hasn't come back, they go too. But it isn't a soccer match after all. A government truck drives onto the pitch and unloads Afghani women held captive. Soldiers hold guns to their heads, when one of the women gets up and runs. Instantly, Jamal and Bibi recognise their mum, but the soldiers are catching up. Suddenly, an old taxi - Dad's illegal taxi - drives up, helps their mum to safety, and drives off. Jamal and Bibi run after them.
When they finally find each other again, they hide in the back of a truck while the driver takes them out of Afghanistan. He drives them to a refugee camp, where they stay for a couple of of days, until their father pays some officers to get them to Australia. First they go to the airport. It's night time by then. Along with some other refugees, they stowaway in a plane. The plane flies them to the coast, where two ferries await to take them to Australia. There is along wait, so Bibi and Jamal play soccer. They get separated from their parents in all the hustle and bustle, and are put on the wrong boat. They meet a girl named Rashida who looks after them. One day, the sailors sail away on another boat, leaving everyone alone in the middle of the sea. They get robbed of anything valuable by pirates, until some Aussies rescue them and take them to what is apparently Australia. There, Jamal and Bibi learn that the other boat was shipwrecked and their parents died. Then news came in that there were survivors, and yes, Jamal and Bibi's parents had survived. They arrived on the island, for that is what it was. It wasn't Australia at all. The people of Australia had voted not to let refugees in. The story ended there, when Jamal and Bibi had been reunited with their parents, not been killed and escaped the government of Afghanistan.
When the guards don't let the two dads into the detention centre, Bridget and Menzies start digging a tunnel under the fence in the middle of the night, when they are found out. By Jamal's dad and Bridget's dad. After much persuading, the two fathers help to dig, when they really are found out! Politicians, including Menzies dad arrive. Then news reporters come, followed by many Australian people. By 'The Parliament Girl's' interview the previous day, many people start to feel persuaded, until the only ones who want tto keep refugees in the detention centre, locked up, are the government, so they are forced to agree. The refugees don't escape the detention centre, but it becomes a better place. Because two young kids cared.
As an individual study, we each had to focus on an issue of Human Rights. I focussed on Poverty in Darfur. We developed some questions, and found the answers. Here is what I found out:
Half the world live on less than $2 a day. Less than 1% of what the world spent every year on weapons was needed to put every child into school by the year 2000, and it didn't happen. 1 billion children around the world live in poverty. 640 million people don't have adequate shelter. 400 million people don't have access to safe water. 270 million people don't have access to health services.
In groups of 4, we chose a topic from Human Rights that was a problem in our community, and took action to help it. My group addressed people in need of clothes. All our planning went onto a group wiki. You can visit this wiki at: http://communityrights.wikispaces.com/Group+Three. To see the planning that other groups did, click on their group's name in the navigator.
POVERTY IN DARFUR REFLECTION
The three most important things that I learnt from this investigation were:
1. There is a huge crisis in Darfur. The government supports the Janjaweed, a malitia group.
2. As part of the fighting, villages are attacked, causing villagers to become refugees. They flee to camps.
3. In the camps, they make makeshift shelters out of grass and torn grass e.t.c. but these do not stay up very long.
Two main articles from The Universal Declaration Of Human Rights that are being violated in this situation are and why:
The right to adequate living standard is being violated when the refugees are living in poor conditions in the camps. Also, freedom from interference with family, privacy e.t.c. is being violated when the Janjaweed attack the villages.
This is how I believe rights and responsibilities are linked after this research:
The people who have had to flee have had their rights violated, do we have a responsibility to help them? Do the charities that help them have a responsibility too?
Inquiry Learning - Human Rights - Community Rights Issue Reflection
Can you have rights without responsibilities?
1. What was the community issue that your group decided to investigate? Poverty: Need for clothing.
2. Why did you feel that you needed to do something about it? I felt that I needed to do something about this issue because all humans have equal rights; some of us have had them denied, others haven't. Why?
3. Using a copy of the Declaration of Human Rights, write the articles below that relate to your community issue. Give a reason for each. * The right to adequate living standard (#25) because anyone who doesn't have proper clothing doesn't have necessities and doesn't live adequately. * The right to equality (#1) because we always have clothes to choose from, but others don't. This isn't fair! We're all humans - and everyone of us deserves to be treated equally.
4. Name three things you found out in you research on community issues that are an example of needs or right not being met. * Yes, there are people in our community who don't live like us. * We don't often stop to think about other people that would give anything for some of the things that we take for granted, * although it's true.
5. Describe one thing that you learnt about planning and carrying out a community action (e.g the order in which you do things, making sure that each group member had a designated job, getting permission, planning events e.t.c.) We had a lot to prepare. First we rung the Salvation Army to confirm a date and time to deliver our donations. Our teacher then put together a permission slip for us to take home and get signed.
6. What are some things that you know now about people and their rights as human beings? Although every human deserves to be treated equally, a lot aren't. A lot of us don't spare a thought for those suffering people.
7. Choose 2 Human Rights articles from the Universal Declaration Of Human Rights and write them on the lines below. For each article, write one responsibility that people need to take to ensure that the right is met for all people. * (#1) Right to equality - We, who live in good conditions can help those that are less fortunate. It's up to us to donate e.t.c. and do whatever it takes. * (#5) Freedom from torture and degrading treatment. For example, refugees. They have a responsibility to look after their children, as do we, to look after them.
Saturday, November 17, 2007
My speech: GLOBAL WARMING
Our earth is heating up. The climate is changing. Global warming is real. So what's happening? Fossil fuels, which are coal, gas and oil, give off greenhouse gases, such as carbon, when burnt. As the number of greenhouse gases increase, the planet becomes warmer. New Zealanders contribute approximately 8000 kg of greenhouse gases per person per year, but the world average is only 5000 kg. Ice from the North and South poles is gradually disappearing, and the Arctic area may have its first completely ice free summer by 2040 or earlier! The loss of ice affects polar bears and penguins greatly. Its their home, and it's floating away or melting. So what could or will happen? As the earth is heating up, causing ice to melt, the sea levels will rise. Scientists guess that the sea levels will rise 2 m or more. This means low lying countries, such as Bangladesh and small island groups could be partly or entirely covered by ocean, leaving 100's of 1000's of people homeless. What does all this mean for New Zealand? With the climate changing, Dunedin could get Auckland's climate, and Auckland could get Fiji's climate. This could mean New Zealand could receive more tropical storms, and an increase in tropical diseases. Western New Zealand could get more floods, while Eastern New Zealand could get more droughts. Some experts say global warming will cause: Some farmland becoming desert, coral reefs ( home to lots of fish ) to die, more forest fires, and some species of plants and anoimals to die out. All these negative consequences! You may think that you are just a person of 11 or 12; how can tiny little me make a difference? But I tell you, small changes could make a big difference over time. A good way to save the planet is to remember the three r's. The first R stands for reuse. This means to use things again when you can, like reusable supermarket bags! Set an example. It's important we get as many people as we can thinking about the environment and being eco-friendly. The second R is recycle. I'm sure that basically all of you use your green recycling bins, and that's great! Keep up the recycling! The last R is reduce. All it means is that if you don't buy too many things in the first place, you won't need to reuse or recycle them! What else can you do? You can ride a bike, a scooter or walk when you can, turn off lights when you leave a room to save power, and encourage your parents to use smaller cars, which use less fuel. Most importantly of all, find out what you can and spread the word. The future of our planet is up to you.
As I feel very strongly about this issue, I have created another blog to give tips on how we can save our planet. Please visit: http://nikkismessage.blogspot.com
Were you happy with your speech? Why? / Why not? Yes. I was very happy with my speech because I felt that I would make my audience think, and I delivered it with confidence and no stumbles. I also got a very good time - 2.54 - and I received lots of positive feedback from my class mates.
What was the most difficult part of this experience? The most difficult part was getting my time down to 3 minutes from 4.5 minutes.
Why do you think this was difficult for you? I think that this was difficult for me because I had so much to say on the subject and I thought that all of my information was important so I didn't know which bits to cut out.
What could you do next time to improve your speech? Next time, to improve my speech I could make it more interesting for the audience by raising and lowering my voice more, and saying lots of things to make my audience think. As I was 6 seconds under time, I could extend my pauses so that my message sinks in.
Speech Score: 37 / 42